Thursday, 26 July 2018
Goals
This week in Te Ngahere we had a choice on what to write about so we could check it and find out what out next goals are. First we had to mark our writing to identify what rubric we were. Then we had to mark it red on the hand in sheet so the teachers could mark it. I wrote a recount about a crash that I had when I was little. I think i did well with vocab and next time I could use more punctuation. Link
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Kia ora mete Fonz. Your writing about your crash was really in depth and made me feel like I was in the situation. I enjoyed it but at the same time I didn’t because of how it happened and what you went through. Maybe next time don’t link your writing but just copy it underneath. Keep it up :)
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