Yesterday in Te Ngahere we started to learn how to use metaphors in our writing. We wrote a poem about ourselves only using metaphors. We were not to use the words because,and I. We were to write five or more metaphors. I enjoy writing about myself one of my favorite one was Fonz is a humongous wall of knowledge but still getting bigger. What I can work on next time is to use better metaphors about myself. This is my first draft.

Metaphor Poem

Yesterday in Te Ngahere we started to learn how to use metaphors in our writing. We wrote a poem about ourselves only using metaphors. We were not to use the words because,and I. We were to write five or more metaphors. I enjoy writing about myself one of my favorite one was Fonz is a humongous wall of knowledge but still getting bigger. What I can work on next time is to use better metaphors about myself. This is my first draft.

Fonz is a Bugatti power full and slim

Fonz is a pair of Pumas flash and expensive

Fonz is a pair of track pants warm and cozy

Fonz is a great and fantastic bomber

Fonz is a laptop smart and slike

Fonz is a humongous wall of knowledge but still getting bigge r

Fonz is stronger than green stone

Fonz is Ktm dirt bike going full speed at his learning

Fonz is a lilac tree wildly swaying in the rough wind

                                              Reduce Reuse Recycle

In my classroom my class and I have been learning about why people should reduce,  reuse and recycle. I think we should do this because rubbish kills sea creatures. Us humans eat sea food like fish, I eat fish, you eat fish, so do we care what happens to our sea creatures? What happens when shopping centers like Countdown, Pac n Save, bands  plastic bags will it stop more sea life? Who knows we won't until the damage has been done.

                                      Other reasons why we should stop  littering

is because in  the world we have 100 million tons of plastic, in the ocean  per year. That's what causes global warming that means if all of the icebergs  melt then water levels well start to rise rapidly. The impact of global warming can change the earth so why do people litter? People litter because they don't feel like the are responsible for the place they are littering in. Why and when will people stop littering should the the government make a law about littering, like how in public areas have signs no smoking,dogs,liquor,guns should the law do something like that?

Last week in Te Nanghere we wrote persuasive writing about reduce,reuse,recycle. We wrote these so other people could stop littering because it kills sea animals,and birds. My things I have to work on is capitals, commas,and full stops.