Last term in Te Ngahere we had to write a explanation about a healthy ecosystem. We had to include Consumers, Decomposers, producers, organic and inorganic matter. I think i did well with the order of it. Next time I could work on getting it finished in time.
Explanation Writing
Kia ora Fonz,
ReplyDeleteYour explanation statement is cool. I think we helped each other but I don’t remember. Now when I read it it sounds more interesting because I can’t remember much about when we had to do that. Maybe next time proof read it because there is only a couple of punctuation mistakes.
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Kia Ora Fonz its me Bells. I love your blog post about your explanation. I like how you put what I did well and what I could do better. With your work I can edit the writing and I think everyone in Paihia School can. Other than that I think your work is awesome.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Bella.